Some feedback needed

[razorhaw]

I just launched my site and I'm just looking for some input on my site before I begin a marketing campaign. Mainly:

1. design
2. add, edit or delete pages/content
3. any errors in the site
4. overall rating of how you like it

Razor Hawk (http://www.razorhawk.com)


Thank you much,

Dave

[tranz]

I like the simple clean look. The colors work well. I would change the text color to white as it is kind of hard to see. Also in the body of the site add another color that is a contrast to the others and a little darker.

I love the image, I would try and use more to reflect and reinforce what each page/section is talking about or dealing with.

You have used an accent color whick is good, i do and the same color, lol.

Use that color more as an accent within the site. Also the text in the header needs to be darker so you can read it.

[razorhaw]

Wow! I guess our taste in color/photos is pretty similar, lol.

I hope I can parellel the same kind of success you probobly have had :)

[tranz]

lol, guess you looked at my site...

I have been doing design for over 15 years. As the CTo of Storhost now I dont have time to do the design stuff. I have to get in the correct frame of mind, and thinking about server configs and bandwidth doesnt allow me to get into it.

I will do it on rare stuff like our site or for a person or comapny I know is going to be a good client.

[Andrew]

Hi Tranz,

Nice pic on your site :) :) :)

http://www.storhost.com/managed.html

[bradley]

Originally posted by Andrew:
Nice pic on your site :) :) :)


Agreed! :D

[razorhaw]

:banana:

[tranz]

lol, yeah thats me and my two techs.

ok, just kidding..

[Adam]

lol...well honestly guys...the bloke in the middle is tony...but the two fine ladies....they're my sales staff...what can i say,....they give the customer nice thoughts...well "happy" thoughts. :D

[robc]

Nice clean professional, i like!

[tranz]

Shhhhh...

[Andrew]

ok,

I need sales reps like that :fork:

[Adam]

lol Tony .... secrets out mate!!

Andrew...you cant have em ;) lol

In regards to post (first apologies to off topic talks)... yeah i love the design, its very clean and slick...thats exactly how i like sites...to the point, clean and pro :)

[Andrew]

LOL

I must apologize for going off topic - cant blame a guy for getting distracted :)

Site looks great - very clean

[Adam]

Agreed. :)

[razorhaw]

Forget about my topic and my hosting business, I'm gonna try and get a job at with trans! lol

[tranz]

Razor,

So have you made the changes yet? Improvements?

Do I need to send my people over? :)

Good place for images is www.gettyone.com BTW. Yes, you should pay for them as well. :)

[razorhaw]

I signed up with gettyone.com. Your right, that is a great place to find images.

I am trying to find some photos that look similar in style, but like you said, are relevant to the page. As far as the text being "white", I am assuming that you were speaking about the links. I was thinking of making them the hover color, and making the hover color even lighter? I tried hover as the orange on the page, but it didn't tickle my fancy.

My main concern right now is an initial marketing and sales campaign. I have begun an email campaign which has only brought me two new clients this past month, adding to my existing 30 clients from my web design company. I guess this is a topic for a new post though, so if anyone wants to meet me over at BUSINESS FORUMS > PROMOTION, I would greatly appreciate it.

PS, tranz, so how about that job? lol

[Loren]

Razor,

I admire that site, very clean and simple looking. Colors go well together and such. Only other thing I would suggest is adding a little bit of flash animation to it, and some text formatting and your set :)

Awesome job wish I still could do stuff like that :-(

[tranz]

Originally posted by razorhaw:
PS, tranz, so how about that job? lol

Hmmm, PM me and we cant talk. Really..

[Adam]

We "cant talk"...was that sarcasm or a typo?

BTW the girls are at my place ;)

[tranz]

man, you just cant trust emplyees these days.

[dnswho]

Nice clear site

[exasko]

Umm.. wouldn't load for me

[Spencer]

Originally posted by razorhaw:

I just launched my site and I'm just looking for some input on my site before I begin a marketing campaign. Mainly:

1. design
2. add, edit or delete pages/content
3. any errors in the site
4. overall rating of how you like it

Razor Hawk (http://www.razorhawk.com)


Thank you much,

Dave 1. The design is clean and sharp, which make for my favorite combination.
2. As far as content goes, you need to add more.
3. I didn't experneicen any errors.
4. I think it's a good design. My only complain is that the text is a bit hard to read.

Overall, good job. :D

[Spencer]

Originally posted by exasko:

Umm.. wouldn't load for me It didn't load for me the first time, but after that it loaded fine. Maybe something he needs to look into.

[exasko]

your right.. now it loads.. werid?


But very nice design 2 thumbs up!!