Comments on my site

[johnpalm]

I would liike to hear some comments about my site http://www.1hostplus.com

How can I make it better?
How can I get some sales?

[Chicken]

Pretty skinny on my monitor setting 1024x768, even more skinny than usual no? Not that that's entirely bad, it was just my first impression. Need to feed that site some of mamma's home cookin' ;) :D

In other news... it seems you almost have two logos in the top left. Not sure why. I'd probably pick one, maybe the larger square one for the corner. I'd also move the credit card symbols below the navigation. Navigation is more important.

Also, in your main body text on the first page, the layout with the graphics and line breaks is nice, but you center justified the lines. Left justifiy them. Centering is nice for titles, but otherwise should not be used for blocks of text.

I also couldn't find your TOS, not on the main pages (link) nor when I went to order. This is not enough of a TOS:

"1HostPlus
DOES NOT HOST ADULT SITES, ALSO WE DO NOT ALLOW THE SENDING OF UNSOLICITED EMAIL !

The FIRST OFFENSE WILL RESULT IN AN AUTOMATIC TERMINATION
of your account without a refund !"

[anandsoft]

Nice design. I suggest a home page link from the forums index page (I don't find a link to the home page from forums page!).

[jvn]

Adding an "about us" or a "portfolio" page would help give a larger image of your service. Seeing: worked with 1000's of clients and created 1000's of graphics and web sites for people around the world and no examples gives the impression of false claims. Then seeing a forum with only a few members after several months enforces that image. I would consider keeping the forum reserved for active clients until it gets more entries. And add some of your best graphics and samples of completed websites with testimonials from satisfied customers. Even if these are from work while with a prior company, or freelance for certain projects, it would give support to your ability.

I like the overall look of the site is good.

As for more customers - do you target your local market or use only web advertising? The Promotion section here is very helpful for directory listings, too.

[ehask]

Hi,

I would modify your page design for Perl Desk or at least ad your logo instead of Perl Desk. I had to look in address bar to make sure I wasnt on a Perl Desk's site.

Thanks,

[nickjc]

Tested in Mozilla 800x600 56k modem. Loads reasonably fast. Links could do with some rollovers. Nice forum although it obviouslt needs more visitors. Good design though. Good luck with it.

Nick

[emstro]

Looks very good - I'm impressed at the number of professional looking sites out there these days.

The sentance "We have been designing web sites for over 5 years and we have 1000's of clients." would look more professional if you spelled out "five" and "thousands." Most professionally written copy spells out numbers unless it is a complex number like "853".